Personal Recount & Factual Recount

A Personal Recount is when you are involved in an event. The writer was personally involved.
A Factual Recount is an event that you were n0t involved with, you may have gotten it from a friend, or it might have been a police report. So the difference between a Factual Recount and a Personal Recount is that a personal recount was an event you were involved with and a factual is from something like the news paper.
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The swoop!

It was a sunny day when Coral was leaving, we b2 went on a class trip to the agrodome and agroventures. We arrived at the agrodome, everyone was excited! we took a look around and saw this long picnic table, we all walked over to the table and sat down, an old looking lady that was probably in her 60's and asked if we could sit down on the table so she could take a photo of us. Then Matua mark told us to go over to Nicola so she could give us a sticker to go to the farm show, we all walked in with excitement, we had huge smiles on our faces, then it started to smell as we were walking in, it smelt like poos and wees, it was disgusting but we got used to it. This 30 year old man came running on the stage like he had a million light bulbs on his head! then he started letting all the sheep's up on to the stage everyone was laughing, then the man called up four people an old lady, Matua mark, Australian and a 20 year old man. The MC asked if they had ever milked a cow?, they all said no, so the MC was tell them how to milk, "you rub your thumb and finger together" so they did, then they brought this cow in all the people who were picked then they were milking the cow it was funny as!. Anyways we walked over to the agroventures and sat down on the veranda and listened to Kyle matua's friend. Kyle gave us these red tickets for the swoop ride, we walked around for a little while, then we went down to a little shade bit matua mark told us to get into groups of three i went with Tiria and Chloe. When my mates and i saw the first lot go i was like i ain't going on the swoop and my stomach had heaps of butterflies. After a few people had gone it was our turn... we were so scared it was not funny! we went straight down our all you could feel was the air going through your mouth it was cool as! then we up and back down my gut's just ran out of me!. Anyways i would rate that as my best day ever especially with the whole class, we had heaps of fun, it was near the end of time but matua wanted to have the best ending of the trip so we stood at the edge of the splash zone and got a photo of the whole class, then all we heard was the engine of the jet boat come and it done a drift in the water, then we all got saturated it was mint as. Then we traveled back to school and were saying our good bye's to Coral, it was really sad but we had some bad times and good times it was awesome with her, then the bell went it was so sad, but she still lives here.

My First Blog...

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